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Post by ShrewStar on Apr 27, 2013 15:43:52 GMT -5
Now, an experts roleplay should look like:
PebbleMoss' amber optics are slitted. The black coat around her maw is damp with rain. Soft and mushy foliage clings to her soaked paws as she flexes her claws. Her silk white banner is lowered, and her sensors twitch with anxiety. Gasping in soundlessly for taste, her scent glands are dancing with delight. Darting, un-noticeably, through the ripped vines, she swarms closer and closer to her target. Within heartbeats, her claws, and senses, were satisfied. She snatched up the rabbit, leaving a small bit of overskin left from the creature's limp tail. Cantering back to the safety of her own territory, she hisses, wincing at the thought of being caught by an enemy Clan. "Stupid... foxdung.. mousebrained cats." She hissed, and turned away.
Notes for Experts: Do you really need notes? o.o
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